Series Pilot: The Soul Can’t Rest
http://www.hulu.com/watch/12585/the-crow-stairway-to-heaven-the-soul-cant-rest (Full pilot episode here)
Originally published November 5, 2010
Edited March 11, 2014
How did this TV show become a hit?
And why did it even need to be made?
A simple review of this is definitely not going to do it this time around. In order to fully grasp the terrible nature of the pilot episode, one must analyze every aspect of it. Let us begin the play-by-play.
The show starts off with our protagonist, Eric Draven (Mark Dacascos, who actually has a passing resemblance to the late Brandon Lee), splashing in some body of water that is never specified (Sound confusing? Try watching it for about a minute or so). He eventually comes across a rope bridge that stretches across a very deep chasm. And who is there to meet him but Eric’s dead wife, Shelley Webster (Sabine Karsenti). They talk about being together forever in what I presume is heaven until a crow shows up to spoil the moment. Shelley has a complete mental breakdown, telling Eric briefly about the legend of the crow before backing away and vanishing into thin air. Eric, for some reason beyond my understanding, stands on top of the “rail” of the rope bridge and leaps into the chasm.
Meanwhile, during a Dia de los Muertos celebration, he falls through–and I’m not exaggerating here–a rip in the space-time continuum. This scene would have been interesting if it didn’t look like a bunch of extras crammed into a place designed to look only somewhat Mexican. He looks around and sees–for some odd teason–some guy inexplicably painted up like Eric in the original film.
What purpose does this serve? The pilot doesn’t take time to explain, and moves on to another plotline. Sarah Mohr (Katie Stuart) and Officer Daryl Albrecht (Marc Gomes) are at Eric’s grave one year after the incident that claimed his life and Shelley’s. The next scene is… Eric walking through the city? I suppose the writers didn’t feel that it was important to include how Eric got out of Mexico and into the city. He confronts a random man on the street and proceeds to beat him senseless in broad daylight. The utter ridiculousness of this scene is baffling. It’s amazing that he didn’t get arrested on the spot. But, I guess it’s just part of living in Detroit.
Then (veering away from Eric), Daryl confronts one of the criminals responsible for Draven’s murder, Tin Tin. Daryl harasses Tin Tin and sends him off after a minute or so. Then, it’s off to the main villain’s lair, where the bad guys watch the video tape of Eric and Shelley’s death. It’s not clear why they are doing this, but apparently it’s not that important because the head honcho, Top Dollar (John Pyper-Ferguson) tells his henchmen that Daryl has been snooping too much, and that they need to kill him.
At his old apartment, Eric has a flashback of the murder, and basically destroys the scenery. He cuts his hand on a mirror at one point, only to see it heal itself. Then, perhaps the most improbable thing that happens in the show (and that’s really saying something), Eric feels this black liquid falling from his eyes until it forms the make-up we remember from the film.
After that, Eric goes to the pawn shop, where he finds his old Gibson guitar and his engagement ring. He confronts the owner, only to be shot in the stomach by the owner’s shotgun. But because he’s a ghost, he heals and…that’s about it. This was the point where I stopped watching, because I just couldn’t take it anymore.
Which brings me to my previous question: why did they even need to make this show? From what I’ve seen so far, it’s poorly acted and poorly produced. How so?
1. Eric Draven/The Crow—While the actor bears a passing resemblance Brandon Lee, that’s about where the similarities end. He’s very monotonic throughout the episode, and when he does use voice inflection it does not sound natural. Also, the fact that he’s built so muscular takes away from the character. In both the comic and the original film, Draven is tall and skinny, and looks like some sort of human skeleton or corpse. When the character looks like he’s lumbering through every scene, it takes away from the terrifying nature of the character. Another issue with the character is how the markings come to be on Draven’s face. Granted, in the original graphic novel, how the markings came to be on Draven’s face is never explain, but in the original film, Eric looks at a mask that he had on the mirror that he used to playfully tease Shelley, then uses that mask as a basis for the makeup he smears on his face. There was a reason behind the make-up in the film: a symbol of his love for Shelley and a reminder to those responsible that he is coming for them. In the pilot episode, the markings just appear with no real explanation, and any emotional significance of these markings is completely gone.
2. Shelley—She just is not that great a character in this version of the story. Though the film version of Shelley appears in only a minute or two of screen time with barely any dialogue, her relationship with Eric resonated more than the relationship shown in the pilot episode. It does not help that the pilot tries to depict the same relationship with more dialogue that comes across as melodramatic and corny.
3. Sarah— I remember hearing complaints about the actress who played Sarah in the original film. Honestly, she isn’t that bad, especially when one compares her to the pilot’s actress. For the most part, she sounds like she is trying too hard to impersonate the original actress. All of her lines sound stilted, and it’s very difficult to become invested in this character as a result.
4. Daryl—In the pilot, he is bland and uninteresting, and also unnecessarily abrupt toward people. He ignores protocol and harasses a street punk, and he is very cold toward Sarah. These two characters do not share the close friendship they had in the original film, which is to the pilot’s disadvantage. Rather than being very good friends, their relationship mostly consists of Daryl harping on Sarah to get to school. Ultimately, Daryl in the pilot lacks the charm of the original Officer Daryl (played by Ernie Hudson), and it painfully shows throughout this poorly-done episode.
5. The henchmen—What happened here? The original movie’s henchmen were excellent because each one had a distinct look, voice, and style to their characters. Tin Tin was memorable because he just LOVED TO KILL things with his knives. There was this sick sense of joy in his eyes as he killed Eric and Shelley, and later when he tried to kill Eric again. In the pilot episode, Tin Tin just looks like a regular street pimp, nothing at all distinctive about his character. The same goes for all the other characters. Each one had a certain personality in the film, while in the pilot, they’re all just the generic henchmen to Top Dollar, who admittedly is not too bad in the pilot. Not exactly the creepy guy from the film, but still intimidating enough to be a potentially good villain.
6. Poorly remade versions of good scenes—There were just so many good scenes in the original film. But just because the scene works on a cinema screen, that does not mean that it will necessarily work on a TV screen. Cases in point: the transformation scene and the pawn shop scene. In the pilot, when Eric is remembering everything that happened before, he smashes a mirror, punches a wooden beam, and screams and shouts a lot. Also, we get an awfully redone version of Eric’s death. It is very poorly choreographed and comes across as unintentionally humorous rather than wrenching and dramatic. In the original film, Eric’s death was shown in quick flashes of brutal detail. The damage that the guys did to him as they stabbed him, shot him, and threw him out of a window to his death was incredibly brutal and visceral. Also, Eric seemed to relive the attack as he stumbled about the apartment and leapt out the window, which added an extra bit of intensity to the scene. In contrast, Eric’s transformation is poorly done in the pilot episode. Rather than the dramatic image of Eric slamming his forearm into a mirror, painting his face, and “suiting up” for vengeance, we instead see Eric punch a mirror for no apparent reason, Eric’s face transform into the Crow face we know (Bogus, in my opinion), and an awfully done flashback. Not only is it poorly shot, but this scene lacks all of the edginess and drama. It is a hollow recreation, nothing more. (Still need proof? Watch the transformation scene in the pilot, then watch this one, from the original film: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xmi5kuwUw6c.)
But before that, Eric walks around the city as if nothing happened, even going as far as to beat up a man who is abusing a woman (In broad daylight, no less) and to speak coherently with both of them. What was great about Eric’s first appearance in the film was that he was confused, like a baby recently thrown out of the womb. This transformation was meant to symbolize Eric’s rebirth as a force of vengeance. In the pilot, however, all of this symbolism is lost, as if the writers of this script didn’t pick up on this symbolism and because of the director’s choice to film the scenes in broad daylight. This use of bright lighting takes away from the supposed “darkness” of the scene, the idea of the darkness within Eric’s reborn soul.
Another scene that lost its impact on the small screen was the pawn shop scene. In the original film, Eric slides open the gate, looks through the window, smashes through it, walks in, and assaults the pawn shop owner. This scene is intense and intimidating because of the electric guitar flares throughout the scene, the chiaroscuro lighting, and the intensity of the sound and visuals. When he smashes through the window, Eric looks like he’s going to kill the owner of the shop, just from the simple gesture of smashing the glass and sending it flying everywhere. As Eric walks into the room, the camera zooms in on his face as he taunts the owner and destroys things, what little light causing shadows to form on his face and give him the appearance of a living corpse. The shop owner’s shouts of anger and fear also help to build up tension as Eric beats him and stabs a knife through his hand. (Here is the original clip from the film… not the complete scene, but all I could find on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxkFWCn_-FE.)
In the pilot, like the apartment scene, all dramatic tension for this scene is lost. The lighting is awful; you can see pretty much everything in the building. There’s hardly any music in the scene; and, if there was any music, I couldn’t tell. Even Eric’s entrance lacks the necessary power to intimidate the shop owner. When the central character is lumbering about awkwardly, the drama of the scene tends to be considerably diminished. Even the exchange between the owner and Eric seems very forced and wooden, lacking all of the urgency and all of the potential for tension.
So, in summary, this show should not have been made. It’s amazing that the show made it as far as it did. The episode lacks the drama of the original film, the acting is awful, the script is poorly written, and the show seems to constantly and poorly ride on the coattails of the original film. This would have been somewhat forgivable if the show had chosen someone other than Brandon Lee’s Eric Draven as the central character. But because Eric is the “protagonist” in this awful pilot episode, I squirmed in my seat as I watched the elements I loved from the original film become twisted, mangled, and destroyed. The original film best portrayed the Eric Draven character, and this was the film that the editors and producers had to throw together because Brandon Lee died while filming his character’s death scene!
Needless to say, this Crow is a turkey. Skip it and stick with the original.
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